With Malice by Eileen Cook | Review

Posted July 18, 2016 by Cristina (Girl in the Pages) in Reviews / 7 Comments

With Malice by Eileen Cook | ReviewWith Malice by Eileen Cook
Published by HMH Books for Young Readers on June 7th 2016
Pages: 316 •Goodreads

It was the perfect trip…until it wasn’t.
Eighteen-year-old Jill Charron wakes up in a hospital room, leg in a cast, stitches in her face and a big blank canvas where the last six weeks should be. She discovers she was involved in a fatal car accident while on a school trip in Italy. A trip she doesn’t even remember taking. She was jetted home by her affluent father in order to receive quality care. Care that includes a lawyer. And a press team. Because maybe the accident…wasn’t an accident.
As the accident makes national headlines, Jill finds herself at the center of a murder investigation. It doesn’t help that the media is portraying her as a sociopath who killed her bubbly best friend, Simone, in a jealous rage. With the evidence mounting against her, there’s only one thing Jill knows for sure: She would never hurt Simone. But what really happened? Questioning who she can trust and what she’s capable of, Jill desperately tries to piece together the events of the past six weeks before she loses her thin hold on her once-perfect life.

Thrillers are perhaps the hardest genre to read and write, because readers are going in with a very specific set of expectations: plot twists, unreliable narrators, dangerous secrets, edge of your seat pacing, and a satisfying conclusion. I’m not sure if this complicated recipe for a good thriller is why they don’t seem to be super common in the YA market, but I’ve noticed a lack of them, which is why With Malice caught my eye. The stunning cover made it impossible for it to escape my notice, and the premise had me clicking “buy” without a second thought, curbing my usual hesitancy to buy books on a whim.

Unfortunately, this book reminded me WHY I shouldn’t impulse buy books.

I was so, so let down by everything that I believed With Malice would deliver. It has so many great reviews that I know I’m a bit of a black sheep on this one, but I was not very “thrilled” while reading it. I chose it as my poolside read over the 4th of July long weekend, and I was pretty dissatisfied that I spent my vacation reading it. A harsh statement, but when it’s compared to Dangerous Girls I couldn’t help but go into it with the expectation of a 5 star read.

The first element of this novel that let me down was the misleading setting. I was expecting a dark European adventure, but instead a great majority of the book takes place in the US with Jill in rehab after the accident. She has the occasional flashback of her time in Italy before the death of her friend Simone, but most of the references to the events that led to the plot of the book are gleaned from police transcripts, blog posts, etc. Now while I did like the inclusion of the different types of correspondence and police records, I felt like the events in Europe were “told” much more than they were “shown.”

While I didn’t dislike Jill, I just didn’t find her compelling as an (unreliable) narrator. Her loss of memory seemed like a bit of a crutch (rather than being a devious, manipulative, or crazy, she just couldn’t remember anything, which made her much less interesting than Anna from Dangerous Girls or Mara from The Unbecoming of Mara Dyer). I like that she clearly had flaws, but I just couldn’t make myself be invested in her future (she was a bit detached, to be honest). I’m also a bit tired of the best-friend-teen-girl-murder-suspect trope. I think it’s overdone, and perpetuates a lot of negative stereotypes about teenage girls (such as that they are jealous, emotional, ruthless, and manipulative enough to be considered killers in the face of any sort of conflict, especially with other young women). I mean, what happened to the good old Agatha Christie/Nancy Drew who-dunnit mysteries with a large cast of characters for suspects and friends trying to solve crimes together? Is that too much to ask?

I also saw 90% of the plot of this book coming. Considering that I found it hard to empathize with any of the characters (Simone was a real piece of work, View Spoiler ») The only character I found compelling to read about was Jill’s Latina roommate in rehab who provided some much needed real talk in this novel, but her presence was eclipsed by the larger (and less compelling) plot of the story.

Overall: Slow pacing and a lack of compelling characters make With Malice fall short of the promises that it’s premise claims to deliver. While the formatting of the book with different transcripts, interviews, and articles intermixed with the narrative was refreshing and worked well with the genre, it doesn’t live up to some of the other big name thrillers in the genres that it is compared too. With Malice is not redeemed at the end of the book either, as the plot “twist” felt extremely anticlimactic (at least to me) and not very exciting or plausible View Spoiler » With Malice, while well intentioned in joining the notable players in the YA thriller genre, read too similar to other well known stories to be able to stand on its own.

Verdict_ Underwhelming


Reading this book contributed to these challenges:

  • Goodreads Challenge 2016

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7 responses to “With Malice by Eileen Cook | Review

  1. I’m sorry you didn’t enjoy it. My co-blogger, Ellen, wasn’t a huge fan either. So you’re not alone in your opinion! With thrillers, I need to be kept on my toes. I’m usually more forgiving of guessing the plot in most other genres. Hope your next read is better 🙂

    • Definitely agree- the thriller genre comes with a certain set of expectations, and the element of surprise is one of them! I really love books that are set abroad too so I think I went into this one with really high expectations (what with seeing so many glowing reviews and all).

  2. I still haven’t read this one yet, though it is languishing on my TBR at the moment. I’ve been trying to disabuse myself of the notion that this is similar to Dangerous Girls (which I truly loved), because I’m afraid of comparing the two of them! Sadly, it sounds like this one isn’t particularly striking and that makes me feel less than enthusiastic about reading it. Only time will tell if I ever get around to it!

    • I got totally wrapped into buying this one because the cover is GORGEOUS and the title and synopsis seemed so mysterious. However, I think I went into the book thinking it was going to be something it wasn’t (AKA Dangerous Girls) so I kept WAITING for something, for a style of writing and plot construction, that never happened. It think going into it with, well, lower expectations and the right mindset may be a way to enjoy it more.

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